|Reviews for Courtyard in a Bad Neighborhood|
| MelissaUmbrella 12/13/12 . chapter 11
If I could critisise this a little, I would suggest that instead of introducing all the characters at once, you show us them one by one, before their first lines or at the beggining of the first scene.
But that's just me nitpicking. This story is seriously beautiful. I loved the relationships and the bittersweet happy ending. The characters are all believable, and I like the way it all came together in the end.