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| Reviews for Hiding In Your Pencil Case |
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   Mylilblackpen 1/1/13 . chapter 4I think this is a stunning chapter because the pen's job is quite significant. It can let you write about everything you've ever felt and can be a therapist or a release in some way but in others it can make you feel even more alone and lost than when you first started. I think this is my favourite chapter, so far. It's great. But in my opinion, and it's only a suggestion, I don't like the use of an ellipsis on the first, fourth and last line - for me they don't work. But I still love this chapter! |
| Jun Li Kanashii 12/30/12 . chapter 6 I like the slightly battle-type elements here. Good work. |
| demonicDRAMAqueen 12/30/12 . chapter 6 AWW cute little sharpner |
| The Doctor of Time 12/29/12 . chapter 6 The first line instantly made me think of my pencil pouch because there are pencil shavings everywhere. I kept reading and felt kinda stupid for not thinking of a pencil sharpener. :D In the eight line it should be: When it's time, (no don't cower in fright) I loved this poem! I especially love the second to last line! Keep those stories coming! I don't think I'll ever get enough! |
| sapphireshadow15 12/24/12 . chapter 5 Oh mi goodness gosh. Naver this poem is simply fantastic! Oh I don't even know what to compliment! The metaphors! Symbolism! Rhyme and flow! Brilliance, as I could expect nothing less. *fav* Happy writing, friend -sapphire |
| Guest 12/20/12 . chapter 3 I love the metaphor of how your the pencil/eraser and they need you |
| Guest 12/20/12 . chapter 1 Oh my goodness I can totally relate to this with me and my friend it used to be like this but were good now:D |
| somethingpequliar 12/18/12 . chapter 1 I don't know how people can write poems. I've never been good at it. This is an exceptional one. Wow. It's just so . . . original and unique. Great job! |
| AvengedtheSinny1 12/17/12 . chapter 2 This . . . just somehow tripped me out. Amazing how you're using little things like a pencil case to connect a bond with a person. :) Your stories are interesting. I give you that! |
| Jun Li Kanashii 12/16/12 . chapter 5 Pulled out of a magic hat? Or perhaps simply written by an under-appreciated poetry-genius? |
| AnimotoSaedaX'D 12/16/12 . chapter 5 XD Makes me wonder if highlighters really do that.. |
| FictionHeart 12/16/12 . chapter 2 The last line of the eraser poem is really strong. Good job :) |
| FictionHeart 12/16/12 . chapter 1 I like how you made the pencil seem so real. I like the poem a lot, but the coupling in some of the lines seemed a bit lacking. Still, it's great. |
| The Doctor of Time 12/16/12 . chapter 5 The highlighter is so amazing! This poem is amazing! |
| AnimotoSaedaX'D 12/15/12 . chapter 4 o.o wow... 0.o |
