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   PoisonedElysium 12/14/12 . chapter 3I think this is the best chapter yet! I love the rhyming couplets, they give it a feeling of completeness |
| Mylilblackpen 12/14/12 . chapter 3 I like this because something so little can hold together something so important. This is beautiful and a really great series which I do hope you continue. Such a great piece which beautiful imagery which will really make me smile whenever I open my pencil case next. This is a great series and beautiful pieces! Superb! |
| Mylilblackpen 12/14/12 . chapter 2 Sometimes I think the whole world, mostly the media nowadays, are like the eraser in this piece. They want to change everything to their design when really you or anyone else was beautiful being jaded. I can just imagine that same little girl trying to rub away her mistakes hoping that everything bad will just be erased, but life isn't like it. Beautiful. |
| Mylilblackpen 12/14/12 . chapter 1 I really like this idea, because as writers sometimes we communicate a pain through words in a file. It's such a beautiful piece and relatable because sometimes all you need is a pencil and paper to write everything and get everything out. This is such an ingenious piece because it makes me think of a girl who has no one she can really talk to and so pours it out on a page with her best friend, a pencil. Beautiful piece. Really. |
| yukiteddy 12/14/12 . chapter 1 hey good job naver p |
| ShadowRavenFeathers 12/13/12 . chapter 3 Great poem! I will always respect the paper clip from now on! If anyone insults the paper clip in front of me they are getting slapped. |
| AnimotoSaedaX'D 12/13/12 . chapter 3 Naw...making a little cute thing seem sad... . |
| SilverTintedMist 12/13/12 . chapter 3 Wow. Very lovely, as always. (Btw, are you trying a new style?) |
| L.C.Doyle 12/13/12 . chapter 3 Brilliant! Just love reading your writings... ta! |
| L.C.Doyle 12/13/12 . chapter 1 Love this too - I felt this to be quite passionate. Thanks for sharing :) |
| L.C.Doyle 12/13/12 . chapter 2 Hi Naver - I just love this piece! Especially the line: "But I'm just your eraser, so you never listen to me." Well done YOU! |
| demonicDRAMAqueen 12/12/12 . chapter 3 Wow, need I say more. |
| Delilah Brightman 12/12/12 . chapter 3 Lovely. Great Inspiration ;) |
| Delilah Brightman 12/12/12 . chapter 2 I really love this! The idea is so unique. I understood it to mean, there is something so common in everyone's life, we tend to ignore it. It may be a blessing. It may be a curse. The pencil, the eraser, the paperclip...don't take anything for granted! This is amazing. Keep it up! |
| ShadowRavenFeathers 12/12/12 . chapter 2 Amazing poem! Poor eraser! From now on, I'll listen to my eraser more! LOL! |
