|Reviews for Torn Asunder Surrender|
| Freiheit98 12/28/12 . chapter 1
interesting...very good. please write more.
small note in line 6 prophesys is spelt prophecies...sorry a stickler for spelling but otherwise awesome poem! :D
| ninjakitty7 12/14/12 . chapter 1
I love this poem. I can so imagine this and tell what's going on. Way to go!