That is really good! I hav uno issue (sorry I don;t know how to say issue in Spanish) Prologue is spelt with a u after the g:-) Soz but you know I'm a grammer/spelling nerd.

Awesome I can sense that this plan is going to flop but I think the main character is great. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Interesting. Keep writing!

CONTINUE! YOU MUST, I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

hmm... this was really face paced. You did a very good job with the dialog it all seemed to flow well the type of thing (I am assuming) [teenage boys?] might say to each other in this situation though you might want to add a little bit more detail in between the dialog so people understand whats going on better... like where are they? How old are they? and basic things like that, although the idea for the story seems to be interesting I can't wait to see what you do next :D