Very nice, well done. Loved every bit of it!

I like your writing style. One thing I'd like to comment on: The plot leaves the reader utterly confused after a few chapters. A bit more backstory would definitely help, maybe flesh out the plot a bit more before jumping into the action scenes. The chapters are certainly entertainingly creative. :D

So cool! Please post more, thanks for being such a great author!

HOLY SHIT THIS IS EPIC. I LOVE IT 3 update soon!