I like the interaction between the various ‘players’. And the idea is good, too. It feels as if it needs more to be complete. Are you planning on expanding on this? There are a few things that should be cleaned up, though. For example, ‘Worries of something going on went through my head.’ and ‘I checked my phone when I’d get ahold of reality.’ read as if there’s a word out of place or something. You might want to go through it and double check for typos. I liked this and hope to see more from you. Thanks for posting.