|Reviews for Relics|
| Fakety Mcfakename 1/6/13 . chapter 5
Well, that was really cool. Your descriptive language was amazing, i could see the desolate house, and the ruined earth. It was really cool! The tone really came accross, i could feel the dust in my throat. I think you've gotten reallly good at that.
This story was still unclear to me, but in a different way. I understood what was happening very well, i just don't quite get what it means. i'm working on it. the rep. of joy was held and tortured, and escaped... the rep. of beauty was stuck in a dying house. Nice work.
Hey, i hope you're doing okay. It sounds like you're having some issues with publishing, i realize that's probably really hard to deal with. Dusk sounds really cool, I hope you eventually can make it what you want it to be.