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   thetedite 1/4/13 . chapter 11Hi, I'm really enjoying your story the only thing I can see wrong is a few spelling mistakes and maybe misplaced comma's but that isn't ultra important so I wouldn't bother with it, I am interested to see where you are going to go with this story now and I look forward to reading your next chapters, well done again and keep up the good work. |
| Sailinginastorm 1/3/13 . chapter 11 Sweet lobe it please keep writing and let her lover come to the rescue! |
| B. R. Rose 1/3/13 . chapter 11 Ooooohh snap. |
| rerte10 1/1/13 . chapter 10 Awesome! |
| Sailinginastorm 1/1/13 . chapter 10 Love it please keep writing |
| B. R. Rose 12/26/12 . chapter 4 Okay. Your paragraphs are impossibly long and kinda hard to read. And EVERYTIME A PERSON SPEAKS THAT DIDN'T JUST SPEAK...A NEW LINE STARTS, OKAY? OKAY. Other than that, this is good. |
| Guest 12/15/12 . chapter 1 Great story! I want to see what happens! Esme |
