|Reviews for Unexpected Wonders|
| thetedite 1/4/13 . chapter 11
Hi, I'm really enjoying your story the only thing I can see wrong is a few spelling mistakes and maybe misplaced comma's but that isn't ultra important so I wouldn't bother with it, I am interested to see where you are going to go with this story now and I look forward to reading your next chapters, well done again and keep up the good work.
| Sailinginastorm 1/3/13 . chapter 11
Sweet lobe it please keep writing and let her lover come to the rescue!
| B. R. Rose 1/3/13 . chapter 11
| rerte10 1/1/13 . chapter 10
| Sailinginastorm 1/1/13 . chapter 10
Love it please keep writing
| B. R. Rose 12/26/12 . chapter 4
Okay. Your paragraphs are impossibly long and kinda hard to read. And EVERYTIME A PERSON SPEAKS THAT DIDN'T JUST SPEAK...A NEW LINE STARTS, OKAY? OKAY.
Other than that, this is good.
| Guest 12/15/12 . chapter 1
Great story! I want to see what happens!