|Reviews for Glassy Grass|
| Swanfrost15 12/16/12 . chapter 1
That was pretty good!.
Remember, paragraphs are your best friend. One huge paragraph makes it really unapealling, and as a reader, I just want to click the back button. You should edit it to multiple paragraphs.
Other than that, the story it's self was really good.
| yukiteddy 12/15/12 . chapter 1
ouch that must have hurted bad :/