|Reviews for As We Are|
| denverreese 12/16/12 . chapter 1
This is a nicely done poem. The different line lengths still find a way in rhythm. The only thing I saw is that in the line "Forever lost in the shadows of mind",I really wanted the word "the" so it would be "Forever lost in the shadows of the mind." Obviously, this is just a suggestion. I would rather you have it the way you want.
| Princess-anna57 12/16/12 . chapter 1
This is a really good poem! Well done. Keep at it!