LOL Phairin seems the funny type too ... he and Marigold, if they are the match in this story, will be ... very well matched. LOL I like your story so far

Hehe she seems sarcastic but so savvy too ... I need her intelligence lol

Please keep updating i love this story1

Had computers not been invented or texting or any of that junk, then I wouldn't be wasting my life hiding behind a computer and not meeting real people! Before the internet was invented, I was always playing outside with my friends and having a life.

Couldn't agree more! Technology IS destroying our lives and rotting our brains. I wouldn't be surprised if armageddon happen within...now.

Yes, yes he can - writing is power, and one of the only ways to save the world from what it is now.

Marigold's words are so precise ... everyone needs to know this!

Ah I love Phairin's reply. ;) I need to make a jar like that too.

Amazing.

I really love this story! I'm enjoying the contrast between Phairin and Marigold's answers. Looking forward to more!

Please don't lose motivation! You are really talented and this is my favourite story on Fictionpress right now. I'm taking English when next semester starts (Wednesday) and I can only hope the assignments I get are as thought-provoking as these are.
I guess neither of them have have any pets? Because I would hate it if they would leave an animal to die just for the Jar of Moments or a violin. Or a younger sibling...
I'm glad to see that you're a frequent updater, and I look forward to the next chapter.
-Firefly

Your skill with words never fails to impress! :D I wonder what Phairin would do in a house fire.

Dude srs this is (like all the others) a truly beautiful work of art! :D Even if it is only two sentences :P Your writing skills are so awesome! :D

Woohoo an update! :D And I love her words. Yeahh so true

Amazing, these writing topics are really cool and meaningful, I should probably tell some of these to my writing teacher and see what she thinks of them