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| Reviews for Mr Warple's Assignments |
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   Roxy99 12/28/12 . chapter 1Such a different way of writing but it is so effective. I really love the story and I look forward to continuing to read it! Great Work! Roxy99 |
| DaraSerian 12/28/12 . chapter 8 Q #1) What are you waiting for? (an open ended question that can be answered any ol which way a person likes.) Q #2) What are you going to do about it? (again, can be applied to anything and would be interesting because the answer the characters gives will reveal something about themselves) (could be about something deep or about the tooth paste in the sink.) |
| natzxox 12/27/12 . chapter 8 Mm, I have a feeling I am going to end up falling in love with Phairin. Is that bad? :c sjfhjksdhf PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| natzxox 12/27/12 . chapter 7 I love Imagine Dragons! Love this chapter! Thank you. 3 |
| natzxox 12/27/12 . chapter 6 I'm just going to go ahead and fave you as an author, because let's face it: you're utterly brilliant. Do you know how creative this is? I LOVE IT. 33333 |
| natzxox 12/27/12 . chapter 5 I love this. I got a Helga-inlove-with-Arnold vibe. Anyhow, happy writing! Please continue, because this is lovely! |
| natzxox 12/27/12 . chapter 4 I have a feeling that both Phairin and Marigold are both very spiteful. I love this story more and more. |
| natzxox 12/27/12 . chapter 3 o.o Interesting letter. |
| natzxox 12/27/12 . chapter 2 Oooh! I like this. Very unique. I am enjoying it quite a bit. :3 |
| natzxox 12/27/12 . chapter 1 This is an interesting approach. c: I can't wait to read more! |
| Nintendo Fan 101 12/27/12 . chapter 8 Metaphorically speaking I also have an elephant sitting on my heart. |
| zaria d. idonia 12/27/12 . chapter 8 All I've got to say is this: Your writting is beautiful. The way you shaoe each character, the way theur thoughts float over their teacher's magnificent assignments. I adofe the story, I think it is a really good idea, writting out the story through the assignments rather than through a normal narration. Update soon! Simply LOVE it! Happy new years, btw! PS: Great, simply great, song choice |
| Arieta41 12/27/12 . chapter 8 Haha reviewing really is the stuff of life LOL they support and motivate people to keep writing :D Ahh I wish I could think of a good question for the characters, but for some reason I'm brainfreezing D: LOL Whoa ... the characters' analyses are deep. But reading all this just gives me such an understanding of them I can't describe. It's beautiful how your writing works. And I hope you enjoyed Christmas and have a happy New Year too! :D |
| Arieta41 12/27/12 . chapter 7 Your writing is so beautiful and lyrical and poetical, it's like I'm one of the characters and experiencing their every thought, every emotion, everything that makes them who they are. I don't know how you do it, but I admire your writing so much! :D It's the truth. :) And I really like your characters, as people, because it's so easy to relate to them. Is the story from real life? Because it seems so realistic and you make the characters so meaningful ... I notice you have more reviews - yay because your story is totally awesome and I am so glad I found it! Happy writing! :D |
| DaraSerian 12/27/12 . chapter 7 Love this chapter. great thoughts about a song I enjoy as well, though I like 'Demons' by Imagine Dragons, better. Dancing down the Isle at a store is something I think all people should try at least once, and this also reminds me of my poem 'I wish I knew' about the need to dance. |
