Can't wait for the next chapter. I love this story so much. The last part makes me wonder about what those things were... very interesting. I laughed at the part about him killing people to get what he wants. I don't know I found it funny for some reason...

You just posted this chapter and I can't wait for the next. :D

I can understand Dawn's feelings. Like losing your best friend to some trashy tramp, it's not fair. Especially when you helped get them together. I think there was a mistake in a line but other than that I still enjoy this story thoroughly. Can't wait for what happens next. I wonder where Dawn ended up...

I feel like this is seriously a book. Like something I would go out and buy. I really enjoy reading this story, it's so good and very eventful! I wonder what is going to happen next. That lady scares me a little bit and who knew Jay could have such feelings... Can't wait for more! :)

Awesome! I love this story! Now I wish I was a vampire. His mother reminds me of my own. I found some of this funny, this is very entertaining to read. Can't wait for the next chapter! One question though, I thought you said that Jay had to stay away from him but in these last chapters it sounded like he was going to stay with him for some time? Again, can't wait for the next chapter! :D

I really enjoy this story! Dawn actually looks like this guy I know, I wonder if he is secretly a vampire... I liked the background info that you inserted in this chapter and the description of the main character. I wonder if he is going to kill his mother? Hmm... I watched a show called "Being Human" and the vampires in that also didn't burn in the sunlight, but they followed most of the other rules. I wonder what will become of Dawn...

Can't wait for the next update for this. Everything about this intrigues me thoroughly... Dawn and Jay are great main characters in my opinion, I like there personalities and I also like the dialogue of this story. The scenes and things are great, and I'm really captivated by this story. Again, can't wait for the update!

Hmm... interesting. I like this new element, who new Jay could take over Dawn's mind and body. I really love this story. I love the speed you have it at and the action and plot happening, can't wait to read the next chapter. This is very good.

I like this chapter also, vampires, I've always wanted to be a vampire... Well in thought. I really like the main character in this story. His actions and thoughts are very interesting to read, I think I would be angry if that happened to me too. Again, could not stop reading this story. I'm really enjoying this story.

This was AMAZING! Phenomenal, it's only the first chapter and I love this story. I meant to read it earlier but I couldn't find the time, happy I finally did. I love the character and really everything about this story. Great job so far I'm very captivated and couldn't stop reading that chapter. This is a great display of writing in my opinion.