Um... I don't know if I should laugh or cry...

I'll go with laugh.

Nah, kidding. Just noticed it was April's Fool. And I clicked 'cuz I saw the summary and got kind of scared, but anyway. Just made my day weirder.

...I just now realized this was written as an April Fool's prank.

,..Derp.

You know, it must suck to be a character in one of those My Immortal clones, particularly if you are aware of how dysfunctional your world is.

That said, I don't really get it. You made the bad parts a little TOO unreadable. Not even "My Immortal" was this bad. I'm just hoping that your rewrite will be interesting, because this doesn't really work too well as a trollfic, I'm sad to say.

Okay, this is a thriller?

Ah...nice one. Haha...April Fools. Well, I'm glad this is the end of Crow Ivory Bella Gina Shana Astelvalis Alucard Light Lynx Werewolf. Lets go Harumi Ichika...!

Uhm... I don't know about you guys, but I'm kinda scared now.

Amazing. This is modern art.

No Edge no. This isn't how you roll, and to potential readers, don't mind this fraction of error. I believe this is an unfortunate event of profile hacking.

If I was an over-emotional, envious and spoiled little brat, and I'd seen how popular he is, it'd do it too. But then again it's a matter of perspective.

Edge, burn this in hell (delete it), please. It's a horrible eyesore.

...
Did you.. do this on purpose? Or did you get hacked? Cuz frankly, I'm having a hard time believing this is your story. ( I mean, I'm pretty sure you don't spell 'because' 'bcoz' or 'bcoaz' or anything like that in your other stories..) *.*

seems interesting and quite good. Nice job.

First, I like it!
Second, have you thought about editing it a little? Like adding paragraphs maybe?
Third, YOU KNOW FRUITS BASKET TOO? BECAUSE IF YOU DO, KYO IS MY FAVOURITE ANIME BOY OF ALL TIME!

Ok so one thing to say, I love it xDDDD I litterally laughed the whole way through it ! Even if most mistakes made me mad...Even if I know you did them on purpose akjsdhfkajsdfasdf ;/7/;

It doesn't make any sense, and your grammar is frankly awful. I just don't understand it!

... What the fuck is this shit?