You managed to make that rhyme, and for that I applaud you. Ugh listen to me, talking like that. I sound like...ew. Ah, sorry. I can never make my poems rhyme, otherwise they sound really weird. Actually, I wrote one or two that did and they were okay. Oh why am I writing my musings in your review? I'm sorry. It's a good piece of short poetry. I like it :) Forever is never? How exactly does that work? If forever was never, would that mean that never is forever, or is it one of those "a square is a rectangle but a rectangle isn't a square" kind if things?

Nice, I liked it a lot. It flowed together perfectly. :)