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TMi The Dork in the Corner 4/27/13 . chapter 27Ahhh just what we needed another guy to compete for our little Noah. I hope this guy isn't a douchebag. But I feel like he is basically what Noah already said , a distraction. But I do like this chapter I wish there was more to read hope u update soon. |
Anon 4/25/13 . chapter 26 Please update asap! |
Anon 4/23/13 . chapter 26 yes i wanted them to break up anyway |
Anon 4/23/13 . chapter 25 LOVE THIS |
Ruby 4/23/13 . chapter 26 OMG noah and luke have to get together! :), and I like how you didn't make the characters go all goo goo eyed at each other and be all I love you straight away. it gives them more depth :) |
PatchouliPatchwork 4/23/13 . chapter 26Okay, okay. This chapter made me all kinds of sad because I do like all the characters. Just because I don't trust Rylan doesn't mean I dislike him. And this situation SUCKED for everyone. If Rylan still had feelings for his Ex and Jackie still had feelings for him, I can't really blame them. They have history, they have feelings already established and if they want to try again, then yeah, that's fine. BUT man, what a shitty ass way for Noah to find out. I feel like if Rylan had said something earlier that, yeah, it would suck and hurt Noah's feelings, but Noah finding out like this was TEN TIMES WORSE. That's awful. D: I feel like since Rylan can't exactly know the extent of how Noah feels, he doesn't realize how messed up this was for him, which sucks sucks sucks. Rylan didn't mean to, but that sucks. I feel bad. I know Noah is going to be a sad, sad (but rightful) mess for awhile. I mean, I'm on the Noah/Luke boat, but still, that sucks. It feels like Rylan just sort of threw responsibility away (and respect) for Noah. They did date. But again, I don't think Rylan knows how broken Noah is. : For someone not in his situation, yeah, it would suck, but I don't think (could be wrong) that it'd be as devastating. Not so for Noah. He already feels like life is kind of out of control, and this just reinforces it. I hope him and Luke find some healing. But I also hope that Rylan and Jackie find a way to make their relationship work. |
Aletiah 4/22/13 . chapter 26You know, even though what Rylan did was wrong, I can't really see him as a bad guy. I think he was truly honest with Noah in the beginning, that he did like him. But after a while in a relationship, feelings grow or go back. And I guess it was even harder when he knew how vulnerable Noah is, how do you break up with someone you know needs you? And about Noah... I wonder if he is truly in love with Rylan, or just the thought about having someone..? Since he does have feelings for Luke too. Update soon! |
Anna Luce 4/21/13 . chapter 26 Poor Noah :( I hope Luke and him are going to get together! |
lovemonsterz 4/21/13 . chapter 26Just discovered this and really enjoyed reading it! Like the writing style & am looking forward to some LukeNoah drama/interaction :) |
heyitsstupidme 4/21/13 . chapter 26Even if Rylan hadn't gotten together with Jacky, Noah and Rylan probably would have broken up sometime, since Noah obviously has feelings for Luke. But the way Rylan broke up with him... he never had as strong feelings for Noah as he had for Jacky and I wish he would have been more honest if he wasn't sure if he's still in love with Jacky. I hope Luke is honest to Aiden now. It definitely looks like Noah and Luke will get together, but we'll see what will happen. :) I really enjoyed reading those two chapters! |
chibikodo 4/20/13 . chapter 26Welp, the end of this chapter answered for me the question of 1) what Rylan was up to and 2) who Noah felt more loyalty to. Sorry but i feel bad for Aiden and Bree. No happily ever afters here with Luke imo. Not until he can come clean and let poor Aiden be happy first. |
lovesyoumore 4/20/13 . chapter 26I really love this chapter! One o.f my favorites. Please update soon |
TMi The Dork in the Corner 4/20/13 . chapter 26Well I enjoyed the last chapter's ending and this one was kinda sad I felt bad for Noah, rylan shouldn't have stayed dating with him if he was talking to his ex, noah should be with luke. Or some new character because he shouldn't have been treated that way. Oh and to comment on what you had said in our pm. I agree in a way of he ends up with like it would also be sort of a cliche. Ending up with the bully or roommate has been done a lot also. I don't know really who I prefer him with right now I think he'd do better with Luke if he ever got out of the closet. Or with someone new too can't wait to see what's next. :) keep it up |
MagnificentFern 4/20/13 . chapter 26Heiiii ! 45 minutes ago you told me that you are glad I will comtinue reading the story... and I can't be more happy because if Noah wasn't to stay with Rylan, this was how I wanted them to break up, i.e. it's Rylan's fault, and there is tons of drama involved. Before I wanted to stick with Rylan, now I want him to suffer as much as he hurt Noah è_é Now I can't wait to see how Noah will deal with the break up ! Awesome chapter :) |
AudenJayy 4/20/13 . chapter 26Rylan did a good thing. Now Noah doesn't have to feel so bad about kissing Luke's finess. |