/lays down on the ground

I don't think I can finish reading this story. From all the hints and ways things are worded, it seems like Luke and Noah won't get together. And I was okay with that until this chapter. Nope, nope, nope. I don't know if I can finish it now. They just have such dynamic interactions. And I was totally right they'd be able to relate their baggage with each other, which is a very positive thing. Ugh, I think part of me died at this chapter.

The ending of this chapter is beautiful though (ignoring my angsting and dying for a moment). The way Noah things is pretty much poetic. He honestly has a beautiful soul and it shows through at the end. I love how he relates to Luke's name. Light as hope and warmth, two things he desperately needs. Light is security, which is what I keep saying he needs : P haha.

I feel like there's a lot more to the Bree and Luke dynamic than they're saying. And clearly that's the case.

Hopefully I'll have more intelligent things to say. I still worry about what Bree would think about Noah and Luke together, but I also think she needs to make some peace and take some steps forward. She's only punishing herself )): which sucks.

Also, I don't know if Noah could break up with Rylan. Which is a big one. He seems to not be good at making choices, really big ones, for himself. haha.

FREAKING AMAZING! hehe yay their first kiss 'swoon' :)

So sad :( poor Rylan
thanks for the chapter, even if I don't like this outcome one bit é_è I can only hope for a miracle now

Well, I can't say I'm looking forward to the next chapters as I imagine it's going to be filled with a whole lot of angst. Noah will feel guilty for cheating and Rylan will most likely break up with him and he will be crushed. Luke will probably snap out of it and deny anything happened and scurry off to be with Aiden and Bree; Noah will be crushed AND alone. People really are the cause of their own misery.

Oh my gosh. That was absolutely perfect. Absolute perfection. Luke's name is prefect, the kiss was perfect, Noah's reaction was perfect. I loved it. The build up to it made it all the better! That was a great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next update!

FINALLY! Aiden and Ry should get yogether after that. I have been waiting soooo long for this moment.

Well, from the way you worded the sentence about Noah being with who he's supposed to be with, I'm going to assume (somewhat sadly) that it is not Luke. XD I still love Noah/Luke, but I will live. I'm now curious if his intended is Rylan or someone else you have planned. I will have to wait and see.

I feel bad for Hailey, but at least she can have closure and move on with her life, especially since she knows it wasn't her fault. I feel like that was a positive conversation for Noah and Hailey, or at least will have positive effects. I also feel like Luke and Aiden's relationship is going to go down in flames. They both want separate things and it sounds like Luke has a really severe reason for not wanting to come out. I can't see Luke just being a dick, I feel like he usually has a good reason for things.

I also feel like Noah is falling really fast for Rylan and I worry that Rylan doesn't know the depth of Noah's attachment to him. I mean, this is Noah's first real intimate relationship. He's going to get super attached as he opens up more and more. Will Rylan take responsibility for a relationship he's pursued with Noah? I'm not sure how to word this. XD I don't doubt Rylan likes Noah, not one bit, but it's the extent of his attachment versus how strong Noah's is. Rylan's been in more relationships, and he can be quite comfortable with being liberal about his sexuality. I don't think I'm making sense, hur hur.

I meant to note this last time, but I forgot. One thing I've enjoyed about this story so far is that no one is "perfect"and there's no "shining prince" out to save Noah. I really don't want it to be that way. I like that everyone have something they need to work out or personality flaws. I like that whoever Noah is with is an imperfect person (I hope it'll be that way, anyways!) This story feels incredibly realistic. Love that.

I liked this chapter a lot. It's good that Noah talked to Hailey and that he seems to be happy with Rylan. I'm not sure how much Luke likes Noah, so I'm curious if Aiden and Luke will be able to work everything out and stay together. I really enjoyed reading this story so far, so I'm glad that it will be a bit longer.

Rylan's not a bad guy but sometimes there's a side to him that shows through that I winder anout... But then again Luke isn't a winner either. Noah & Logan are such sweet siblings. :)

Rylan was sweet in this chapter. I think it's good for Noah to have a boyfriend who is out. And I'm glad Hailey took the "news" well.

cute luke-noah action! ryland uhh... okay...

good chapter :) i really want to see more Luke and Noah, I don't like Rylan hehe :P please update soon!

My god this is absolutely amazing! Luke and Noah all the way :) pretty please update soon i was seriously dreading reading this chapter cause i would love it that much more and then have to wait for the next update. Please keep writting you are doing a great job :D

I want Luke and Noah together because they seem to understand each other more. I don't like Rylan because the way you portray he gets it but doesn't. He's forcing Noah to jump through hoops with him when he's not ready. Yes its important to be clean with your parents about who you are but Noah has alot more at stake then just his sexuality. I don't know I think Aiden and Rylan should some how get together and Luke and Noah end up together.

Please update as soon as you can! :)