I love this story. It's really interesting. I wonder about Arden and Chris though. Are they gonna get together? And what about River? He's an asshole. A lot of questions. I need answers. Update soon please!

Can you please update soon? I can't wait to read more... I've been stalking this page since chapter 7 came out and I really can't stop reading this!

I don't think I've reviewed before, and I don't know why the hell I haven't.

It's amazing how you portray the abuse. It definitely hurts to see Chris suffer unlike the popular BDSM-ish relationship shown, in my encounters, with other boyXboy stories. I LOVE LOVE Chris, and it's hard not to. 3

And the way Arden's thoughts play out. It's very smooth and realistic. He seems human. The cussing is played in well. It's better to under do it than over do it.

Chris, Arden, and River's relationship is well balanced, and I look forward to EVERY update. Thanks! 3 ya!

I can't say enough how much I love these two together. Cute chapter :)

This is really cute.

Please please please please PLEASE update soon! I can't wait to read more! Your writing is great, and I really can't wait to read the magic you weave next chapter! Please update soon! :D

Ughhhhh this is horrible (and by horrible I of course mean that its amazing in a horrible way and I love it...)! You're a really good writer, and I plan to obsessively stalk this page for updates. Keep up the great work :)

I'm in love with Arden and Chris' budding relationship. Being in Arden's mind is hilarious. I can't wait for the confrontation between River and Arden. River needs to be a taught a lesson. Great story so far!

I'm glads I waited til you were 5 chapters in before I started reading because I most assuredly would have been one of those annoying readers that would be begging and pleading for more after every chapter. As the case may be, I have saved it all for chapter 5. I loved it. really. the writing is lovely, Arden and Chris are utterly endearing and charming...and is it bad that I was hoping that Cash would have viciously attacked River, you know gnawed off an appendage or something for hurting Chris...but then poor Cash, how would he get the taste of River out of his mouth. :) I am so looking forward to the next chapter though. Arden walking over to Chris' What's he going to find, or who and what is he going to do about it? Will he catch that bastard River in the act and become the knight in shining armor. Needless to say that's what I'm hoping for. :) Completely enamoured I am.

I can't handle this. This is too little for my curious self! I can already feel the potential of this story bubbling! The tension!

Holy crap. Chris is hiding something. I wanna know

Imma keep this simple. Keep going.