|Reviews for The Journey to Nevercross|
| Carolina Martinez 1/25/13 . chapter 3
It's a great story! And the 'I must flee before Neon catches me' part is really funny! Though, I'm not a very good beta because I can't think of plot, style, mistakes, etc. Overall good story and it's only the second chapter! :D
| Carolina Martinez 1/25/13 . chapter 2
Wow, the people writing here write much better than my classmates! :D
| Lloyd Dostya 1/16/13 . chapter 1
Nothing wrong as far as i can tell
| fairyrain 1/14/13 . chapter 5
What's her mother? Pixie? Dryad?
| fairyrain 1/14/13 . chapter 4
Why is one sister a pixie and the other a dryad?
| Coraline Hellmiss 1/1/13 . chapter 1
You earned yourself a new follower! Can't wait to read more! BTW, can you check my stuff out?
| xLunaRorax 12/30/12 . chapter 2
Awesome start. Cant wait to read more :)!
| Ghostlingx 12/27/12 . chapter 2
Its good, interesting, and the idea of the story is very easy to catch. :)
Though, there is still a lot that you can fix in your writing. First, your grammar needs a lot of tweaking. (Re-read work after done? :3 )
Good job though! Keep up the good work! XD
| SilverTintedMist 12/25/12 . chapter 1
Cool concept. I'm guessing this is the prologue? I eagerly anticipate the rest. :)
| Ghostlingx 12/23/12 . chapter 1
Hahaha! You know whats funny? The name for one of my stories is named Pixie! XD
Good job! Keep it up! Try not to put the entire story in italics.
| yukiteddy 12/22/12 . chapter 1
interesting story please continue :D