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| Reviews for The Journey to Nevercross |
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   Carolina Martinez 1/25/13 . chapter 3It's a great story! And the 'I must flee before Neon catches me' part is really funny! Though, I'm not a very good beta because I can't think of plot, style, mistakes, etc. Overall good story and it's only the second chapter! :D |
| Carolina Martinez 1/25/13 . chapter 2 Wow, the people writing here write much better than my classmates! :D - Carolina |
| Lloyd Dostya 1/16/13 . chapter 1 Nothing wrong as far as i can tell |
| fairyrain 1/14/13 . chapter 5 What's her mother? Pixie? Dryad? |
| fairyrain 1/14/13 . chapter 4 Why is one sister a pixie and the other a dryad? |
| Coraline Hellmiss 1/1/13 . chapter 1 You earned yourself a new follower! Can't wait to read more! BTW, can you check my stuff out? |
| xLunaRorax 12/30/12 . chapter 2 Awesome start. Cant wait to read more :)! xoxo |
| Ghostlingx 12/27/12 . chapter 2 Its good, interesting, and the idea of the story is very easy to catch. :) Though, there is still a lot that you can fix in your writing. First, your grammar needs a lot of tweaking. (Re-read work after done? :3 ) Good job though! Keep up the good work! XD |
| SilverTintedMist 12/25/12 . chapter 1 Cool concept. I'm guessing this is the prologue? I eagerly anticipate the rest. :) |
| Ghostlingx 12/23/12 . chapter 1 Hahaha! You know whats funny? The name for one of my stories is named Pixie! XD Good job! Keep it up! Try not to put the entire story in italics. |
| yukiteddy 12/22/12 . chapter 1 interesting story please continue :D |
