Wow this is the saddest thing I have ever heard.

Aw! :( That's so sad!

Good job on it, though! Drew me in! T_T Some missing punctuation marks and a spelling error or so, but it's really good anyway! T_T

And this is what poetry is. Emotion. Experience. A reaction to an emotional experience. Nice.
Angel

Are you sure you have not lived the same life as me? Because this is the second poem in a row that I have read and yet again I have been through this. It is painful isn't it? I had friends who are twins and they were my best friends from 3rd grade to 6th grade. Then I started to get other friends and they started to dislike me for no reason. Then in eighth grade they just completely started hating me. I know how you feel, trust me. And yet again it was well written. And it spoke the truth too.

You expressed your feelings very clearly.

this is really good. it shows the different emotions and thoughts of the poem clearly:)

Wow, that was really good. I liked how it showed the emotion and told a story.

I had a friend since pre-school. Then in fourth grade she started to treat me like trash. Even when I was the only one who helped her when she was hurt. I see her every so often, I feel sad and angry, but then I think, "She hurt ME. She betrayed MY friendship. So it is not worth it to feel sad because I tried to be friend, but she didn't want ME."