I think you have a habit of writing names not meant to be there. Like you wrote Kelly instead of Zoey.

Interesting story, though! :)

Oh, my god!

Lesson learned. Always read the directions.

This is so original and awesome!

Very good! I still wonder why they never went to the woman to demand answers. Aren't they curious as to HOW she knows "what they're there for"?
I didn't really like Christi's ability. Acessing the Internet through the mind . . . Well, there's a first time for everything, I guess.
I like your writing. It cuts straight to the point.
I only wish you would've shortened the character amount. Eight a bit much to follow.
I'm glad I decided to read this - it was well worth it.

Ahh ... so they all learned their lessons ... and it's a happy ending, too! :D Yay!

THANK YOU JEDD You're saving them all ...

The beginning of the end ...

NO NO NO NO ...

Whoa. Scary ...

Oh no ...

Oh no ... I hate to think of the unexpected side effects of these pills ...

So far things seem cool ... but I can't help but think of the life-threatening consequences you mentioned in the summary. I really hope nothing really bad happens to any of them ...

The suspense ... I love your writing style btw!

Oh my god ... they must be teaching them that you have to be careful what you wish for ... It totally reminds me of this book called "The Monkey's Paw," in which a monkey's paw can grant wishes, but they have unexpected and underestimated effects ..

Is the whole thing really a science experiment? It sure sounds like one ...