|Reviews for It's oil that thrashes in water|
| Kurt Kyre 1/1/13 . chapter 1
This is really nice. I like it. I might suggest that you try a different word than "conscientiously" in those two usages... it doesn't seem to fit, but I may not understand they way you are using it...
| Naver 12/26/12 . chapter 1
That's a good scene you have painted, great imagery. It reminds me of my poem "Here Many Places Exist" In the way the scene is described and it has a slight story atmosphere... Continue to write. :)