This is a sweet piece and it's clear to see how much you love your parents. I hope they got to see how much care for them by perhaps reading this? It's a great piece and certainly gave me a warm feeling inside. Brilliant piece, what can else can I say?

This is a really heartwarming piece of work, I can really tell how much you love your mum and dad :)
I'm guessing you wrote this as a Christmas present for them? :P

Aww :)
Go parents! Amazing description, maybe you can make another one but this time about friendship! Just a suggestion xD

awww this is really sweet...this made me tear up a little bit...

*hugs* this is really sweet. Anyone can tell that you care an awful lot for your parents and look up to them.
This made me smile and I agree with this. When one parent leaves though, the other has to bear the burden of both roles and sometimes skips out on a few things. In the end, they try their very best and love their child very much. Or at least I know my mother does. She'd protect us until her last breath if she had to...
Thanks for this, it was beautiful

I love this story... I have nothing to say about it that how good it was(I love you mom and dad). so yeah awesome job keep writing