Nice start :) I like that you haven't kicked into the story to early, and are letting it grow. The summary intrigued me when I went to your page, so I thought I might have a look :) would love to see more.

This is a good story! At first I thought that the mom had died…especially when the dad said that she couldn't be here right now…Oh well, I figured it out! I really like this so far… but I'm confused on another part. Is Mathew the dad or the brother?

It's really good! I like the premise. And funny enough, I usually stick to fanfiction as well.