A fitting end indeed.

We did. And when I tried predicting...the closest I got the this plot was that they both died. :P

I loved it! Not gonna lie, I wanted more Jason because I don't really understand his place in the story now, but I loved it nevertheless! I like the 180 shift in Lee's opinion of Eric. He's sweet, if not a little crazy. But I love the fact that he appreciates Lee for trying to save his daughter. And now they are off to find a cure. I wonder if they will be successful. Guess that's for my imagination to decide :)

Good job, as always!

Stunning! Simply wonderful! I felt as if I was reading a real book. I didn't even see any mistakes!

I can tell you've put some thought and research into this, and it's great! Simply wonderful!

Ok, I like Eric, but I LOVE Jason! Go underdog, nerdy, computer guy! Love his hair and glasses! I'm in love! How come you are so good and making me fall in love with your characters?! Eek! I love him and hope Lee lives so that he can kiss her good and hard.

I only have a few questions that I may have missed while swooning over Jason: does this disease take lives, or turn them to vamps? And is Jason a vampire or just a human working for vamps? If Eric is a vamp, how did he become one?

These were probably all touched on in the story, but it's early and I missed it.

Great job! Update soon!

...She won't die, will she?

Nice! XD I don't think you messed this up at all. You took this to a whole new level. And thank you for writing a damn good vampire apocalypse story.

This story has a lot of attitude. We see the story's world through the eyes of the protagonist, and like looking through coloured glass we also see her perceptions of it as well, even if they're not spelled out they're there all the same, which takes talent. Your writing style flows nicely, moving smoothly between what she's thinking and what she's seeing. And the dialogue is audible and real.

You have definitely found your flow, and you're using it wonderfully. I can't wait for more.

Wow, Irony'sFriend, I'm impressed! Your writing style has come so far since MM! You descriptions and everything were just superb! What a unique spin off of an idea that I'm getting increasingly bored with. I mean, post-apocalyptic worlds are SO overdone, as are vamps, but you did a great job of making this different. I love your main character. I mean, she doesn't have a violent vendetta, but a noble one. That's pretty cool. I especially liked the vamps. They aren't blood thirsty...but interesting.

I bet this Eric character will be important!

Wow, I'm glad I read this. Looks like I have more things to read of yours! I can't wait! I hope you update this soon. Really good writing here! You have such talent!

MW