|Reviews for Gotham High|
| Anonymouse 5/5/13 . chapter 14
Interesting pieces of music you have for each chapter. I kind of like your plot development, but please don't be too dramatic. Can you have some adventures that are just plain weird or funny?
I also like how you use characters that people have forgotten or don't really think about. Can we see some more of those?
| Anonymouse 3/10/13 . chapter 11
So in a brief summary, the Bat-sub isn't working properly, Citrus has no idea how to pilot it, Batman's been shot and he's dying, and Citrus has to somehow save his life?! What the heck?! Well, now we know he didn't wear the bullet-proof vest.
You have a few misspellings here and there. Also, it's be kind of nice if there was more detail.
For the next chapter, if you haven't already, I suggest you research on how to handle those kinds of injuries. Also, you seem to be foreshadowing that the Batman will soon find out about Citrus's knowledge of him being Bruce Wayne.
I like your arcs so far, but there seems to be something missing that I can't put my finger on. Good luck on finding out what it is.
| Crash Dummy 2/10/13 . chapter 8
Um...okay Guest. Nice advice.
Anyway, I'd really like it if I got some feedback on my writing. Even if it's just about grammar errors, I'd really appreciate it. The next chapter will be posted soon and I hope everyone likes that I'm exploring the characters in the DC Universe a bit more.
I hope everyone enjoys the trials that Citrus goes through and I'll try to broaden the characters a bit more. Please enjoy.
| Guest 2/6/13 . chapter 1
Creativity is all about not getting hit by a train. What i mean is, a camera or a paint brush wont stop a train. Batman cant stop a train. I cant stop a train even though IM a super hero. Just stay away from trains...and double chins. they might eat you.
| Anonymouse 1/25/13 . chapter 8
Have you considered Echo?
| Crash Dummy 1/18/13 . chapter 7
Can somebody tell me how to post the songs so that it allows the YouTube address.
| Blue-Kitsune-13 12/30/12 . chapter 5
PrettyGirl12? The same one that reviews my FanFiction story, Humanity? Is that really you?
Yes, this is the same Dummy. And I am the same Kitsune.
I'm sorry about Humanity. I am posting an explanation for the delay ASAP.
Please, enjoy Dummy's story! I'm just glad that she used Dummy for her account name!
| PrettyGirl12 12/27/12 . chapter 1
Hi, don't I know you from somewhere?
If you're the person I think you are, it's nice to see you posting your own stories.
If not, this is really good. Gotham High? Okay, it does sound a little weird for a tv show, but I'd try it.
Please update soon.
| Crash Dummy 12/28/12 . chapter 2
Hello,I just looked at the reviews.
For future reference, people can debate on the review board. However, I appreciate if there was no arguing and I hope that there will be no language with intent of malice or violence.
Secondly, if there are any questions about what I write, I will reply to them myself and I wish for no one else to defend me no matter what the intentions were. If anybody is wondering, I will not remove posts simply because they are offensive to me. I will remove them if they pose a threat or insult to other reviewers.
It is true that I wrote this on fictionpress instead of fanfiction because the show never actually aired and there isn't an area to post it. But, this is my own universe of Batman and its characters. I do not own them, and I love writing about their characters. This story came from the idea of Gotham High and not its actual story. These are my arcs and my story.
Gotham High does not come from a specific universe asides from my own. I bring up characters whom I feel the audience and I would enjoy.
Batman is an icon that the world sees as one of the, if not the greatest, heroes of all time. I have no intent of insulting the Batman or any other DC character.
I do not mean to be sound as evil as a politician, but I respect fictionpress and its authors. It is a place were writers can show their works to the world without being overly patronized or feeling restricted. In this Batman universe, the one I imagine, I can bend characters to my will because of the lack of or few restrictions that exist.
I am not writing this for profit, nor to mock the characters. I am doing this simply because I love writing in this universe. If there are any more qusetions, please post and next time I shall try not to give such a lengthy answer.
Thank you for your time and patience.
| Blue-Kitsune-13 12/28/12 . chapter 2
To Robber Queen and Alyssa Roush:
I understand where you're coming from, and you're partially right. Gotham High is not an original idea. However, come to think of it, is anything truly original?
FanFiction is organized into specific book series, comics, shows, etc. As Gotham High was never actually aired, there is no proper place for my sister's story on FanFiction. And, since it never aired, every episode is a creation of Dummy's imagination. I'm not being rude, I'm just being honest. Besides, sisters have to defend each other, right?
By the way, have you read Dummy's prologue, which starts both chapters thus far? She clearly asks for constructive criticism, not pointless criticism. So, to make your criticism more constructive, is there a place on FanFiction you would suggest she post this? I'm sure that Dummy and I would both gladly take any suggestions into consideration.
Thank you for listening,
| Robber Queen 12/27/12 . chapter 1
This is good, believe me, but I think it might be more appreciated on .
| Alyssa Roush 12/27/12 . chapter 1
Not trying to sound mean, but this is fanfiction.
| Blue-Kitsune-13 12/27/12 . chapter 1
Salutations, Dummy's (hopefully) adoring public. That is, if anyone has read this yet.
Dummy, have you gotten any emails about someone following you? Have you checked your Traffic Stats?
For those of you who do not know, I am Dummy's loving sister, whom has shared a room with her for most of our lives.
Now for some constructive criticism:
You have a good start, but you could try to hide your hints a little. You seem to be throwing names around. Maybe you could test your audience by only giving one name, like saying Mr. Coyne instead of Joe Coyne? Maybe you could invent a name and proper identity for Music Meister?
I like that you've introduced (almost) everyone, but your plot seems a little fast. Maybe you could add a sub-plot?
Hoping you don’t delete your first review,
(PS. You have a very minor typos, i.e. missing spaces and a missing s here and there. I’ll leave that to you!) :)
| Crash Dummy 12/26/12 . chapter 1
Sorry about the link to the songs. After I finish the second chapter I'll fix that.
I hope to get reviews soon and I hope people enjoy the story. I will look at these reviews daily to check up on ideas or opinions.
Constructive criticism is appreciated, overly negative criticism where I am insulted or treated like a moron is not.
Thank you for your hospitality and patronage.