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   Dawnseclipse327 3/3/13 . chapter 8You have a very interesting plot! |
| Lifh Forest 3/2/13 . chapter 1 28 Days Later... |
| Viviana 1/25/13 . chapter 1 Hey Kathreen I FOUND YOUR ACCOUNT! HAHAHA CHEW ON THAT! TINANA TOLD ME! CHEW ON thAT! HAHAH! Tricked us well but, not well enough. See you at lunch to plan the banner at ISBA. XD |
| unconscious willpower 1/23/13 . chapter 1 This story is terrifying and terrific. A helpless main character is stuck in a zombie epidemic with no idea what has happened. With no help in sight! Delicious. Please write more! |
| Guest 1/23/13 . chapter 2 hey its angela. this is pretty osm. :D |
| harrisonmarks 1/21/13 . chapter 1 Good intro, but if her last checkup was on January 23rd and Julie believes it is near the end of the year, and she had been in a coma, how did she survive without food or water? |
| sapphireshadow15 12/29/12 . chapter 2 I liked this update. I thoroughly enjoyed the description of the corpses. Julie's desperation added to the severity of the situation. Here is something I think should be revised: "My hand tentatively reaches out and touches the bloody silver handle and turns." This sentence is kind of a run-on. I had to reread it for it to process. How about: My hand tentatively reaches out to the bloody, silver handle. I turn it slowly. Or something similar. It's just a suggestion. Nice work. Happy writing, friend -sapphire |
| loob88 12/29/12 . chapter 2 Please please please continue this amazing story! The way you describe the hospital reminds me of the hospital in Doc Mortis, the fourth book in my favourite book series, invisible fiends. I think this should be published as an actual book because if I saw this in a bookshop, I would buy it straight away. This story gets five stars from me! |
| sapphireshadow15 12/28/12 . chapter 1 I liked the concept. Though when I read your summary, I could've sworn this was going to be a Walking Dead ripoff. But it wasn't. Your descriptions are balanced, with a good plot flow. Your grammar is fine. No harm there. The ending sentence isn't a very good suspense instiller. It sounds more like you forgot a sentence. It's not bad, by any means, but perhaps you could have left us with a cliffhanger, or a dramatic emotional line. It just seemed lacking to me. The rest was very interesting, however. Great job. I will be following this story. Happy writing, friend -sapphire |
