I fear I'm rusty to the core to give this piece what it deserves.

Delivered to your exacting standards, and bounding with quality. I must now take a little more time to read and soak it in.

You travel to the line before I would have chance to react to the gun, regarding your poetic quality, I've a lot to learn.

Thank you IR.
M.

You sound so sophisticated! It sounds so perfect and grammatically correct and i like poems that have good grammar

This is beautiful! Amazing job. It had a wonderful flow and a firm grasp of concept, but it wasn't one of extreme obviousness. You've gained a follower here.