okay, iam dying inside pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase pleaaaaaaaaaaaaase update. Im trying not to go absolutely craycray herreeeee pleeeeeeeease? update?

My god i hate u! :-( Its so cliffhangar! I demand u update at once! Hahaha
just kidding
i aint a bitch. Im just so pissd off by thy cliffhnger! Agggghhg Caramel Loves Lawson. In team Lawson! 3 I think Zain is sneaky! And when r u gonna feature Vctoria. Hahaha i look forward to meeting Karen.

MORE. MORRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE.

Well written, as always, but I noticed a few times where you left out a word or two. Keep it up!

Ah, this was such a wonderful, romantic chapter! The phrase "Relief and hope and love and the fiery heat of his passion, his lust for her heart, her mind—her everything." made me smile. I really love this chapter! I love this story because it has more heart and reality than many of the books I have read. I cant wait for your next update!

This story is really great! Update soon please!

A major step. Law is finally getting the truth from Caramel... along with a little hope.

Beauty and the Beast's castle? THAT should look interesting in the middle of a golf course.

That was cruel leaving us with such a dramatic cliffhanger! I don't know what else to say but urgrghrhjndjks about not knowing. Interesting twist about Isaac and Lucas' attachment to his mother/animosity towards Isaac. Looking forward to the next chapter! xx C.T

aww. it's ok. you're awesome.

ahaha. loved it. :) where's zain?

OMG! I love it! I've been waiting for Caramel/Law lovin' for agess!
Please update soon!
And good luck with your Creative Writing! ;)

HeyO! I shall not review for this Chapter only. This is rgarding the whole story (so far)
Anyway, I am inlove with ur plot. Nice work
Though, please please pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase add more chapters! :D PLEEEEEASE 3
BTW who is Zain and what does he want from Caramel! Im team Law all the waaaaay 3.
Just add more dramah and more awesumness

I really enjoy reading this! I can't wait for the next update. In the authors note you said, and I quote,"It's just been a really tough time for me. I won't make any excuses." I hope your hard time smooth out soon! :)

This was amazing! I haven't reviewed in over a month (sorry) but I'm definitely going to start it up again because you deserve scores of them for TBC. I do really love how you're developing each of your characters individually along with the story as a whole. Your writing style is easy to read because you don't use over-complicated language to make yourself seem smart, and I think that's what really showcases your intelligence. The issues Caramel and co face are realistic and complex and you portray their reactions perfectly. I'm am in love with this story and I'll be counting the days until your next update! xx C.T

I know that you don't want comparisons between this story and the original, but I wanted to say that I'm pleased that you chose to have Caramel buy her own home. To me that was one of the parts that best displayed her indomitable and unique character.

Her poor bodyguard/PA. At least she won't be bored.