|Reviews for The Fault is Not in Our Stars|
| Miggles 3/2/13 . chapter 6
Lovely new chapter - spotted a few typos; maybe needs a little more proofreading. :) But short, but hopefully the next one will be longer.
| Miggles 2/24/13 . chapter 5
Ahhh love it so far - it's really well written and I love the idea of what might have happened to the human race in the future! :D
I spotted a few errors here and there, like missing punctuation, or missing words etc etc
Update soon! :)
| Shadow's Core 1/31/13 . chapter 3
Really want to see what happens next
| arrowtosparrow 1/30/13 . chapter 3
Happy birthday! The story's doing great, and things are starting to get interesting. Keep writing!
| AcerolaOrion 1/22/13 . chapter 1
| PiratePrincessSarah 1/22/13 . chapter 2
Wow, Aurora is stubborn, but I guess stubborness gets you somewhere! XD Again, very interesting!
| Miggles 12/28/12 . chapter 1
Liked the first chapter, but it seems as if you say 'Hal' too much. There are a few typos too, but apart from that, really good. Looking forwards to seeing where this will go. :)
| PiratePrincessSarah 12/28/12 . chapter 1
Very interesting. I like they way you did the messages from the computer first! Interesting concept, I'll like to read more of this!
Here, have some Awesome Sauce!