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| Reviews for The Fault is Not in Our Stars |
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   Miggles 3/2/13 . chapter 6Lovely new chapter - spotted a few typos; maybe needs a little more proofreading. :) But short, but hopefully the next one will be longer. |
| Miggles 2/24/13 . chapter 5 Ahhh love it so far - it's really well written and I love the idea of what might have happened to the human race in the future! :D I spotted a few errors here and there, like missing punctuation, or missing words etc etc Update soon! :) |
| Shadow's Core 1/31/13 . chapter 3 Really want to see what happens next |
| arrowtosparrow 1/30/13 . chapter 3 Happy birthday! The story's doing great, and things are starting to get interesting. Keep writing! |
| AcerolaOrion 1/22/13 . chapter 1 cool |
| PiratePrincessSarah 1/22/13 . chapter 2 Wow, Aurora is stubborn, but I guess stubborness gets you somewhere! XD Again, very interesting! |
| Miggles 12/28/12 . chapter 1 Liked the first chapter, but it seems as if you say 'Hal' too much. There are a few typos too, but apart from that, really good. Looking forwards to seeing where this will go. :) |
| PiratePrincessSarah 12/28/12 . chapter 1 Very interesting. I like they way you did the messages from the computer first! Interesting concept, I'll like to read more of this! Here, have some Awesome Sauce! |
