i love this chapter so far. Please write more.

I am so glad that the second story is up. I have been waiting for this story because I LOVED Apathy so much. I think the idea behind this is brillant and often wish that I could come up with an idea as good as this. I can't wait to see what is in store in this story.

Yaaaaaaaay! You could not have better timing for posting this chapter, as I was about to pass out from boredom while studying for my geography exam. Reading that will probably be the only enjoyable part of my weekend.
It's got a bit of a "Hunger Games" feel to it, what with the fighting-to-the-death arena thing. Which is a compliment btw, because I love the Hunger Games. But it's not TOO similar. Your concept is pretty original, which is why it's so captivating, along with your incredible writing abilities.
I can't wait to see more, and good luck with the Amazon contest.

amazing amazing chapter! I wonder if he'll escape... but I'm an evil person, so I hope that he'll suck it up until he gets a power of some sort and then uses it. I wonder what his power would be... or Charlotte's... hmmm... though it sounds like she's going to die, but I can't really judge from the small part you posted.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

I bet the Harbringer is Scarlette! Oh I can't wait to to read more! The first installment was wonderful, you really have an amazing talent. Thank you for sharing! Waiting patiently for part two! :)

So glad you posted!
0.0 I'm so excited for more!
Thanks

it's scarlet isn't it 0.0 or Abigail GREAT SCENE AHHHHHHHH!

Wow! Thank you thank you thank you! This is awesome and I'm even more excited for it to begin now. Seriously, I think I might explode from excitement. And yay for a Liam with emotions finally!
Also, I wanted to wish you good luck in getting Apathy published. I think you're an awesome author and I hope the publishing companies agree. If it does get published, I really home they will sell it in Canada (where I live) so that I can buy it.
Finally, call me crazy but while reading this little teaser excerpt, I somehow decided that the Harbinger has to be Scarlet. I just have this gut feeling.

Thanks so much for posting this! I can' t wait for the next book in the trilogy!