That was actually pretty cool! I love the sci-fi feel to it, and the action was quite satisfying I'll admit. A few other things I liked were the descriptions, and the characters. I like the main protagonist so far, but I am more interested in seeing where you take him. Seems reminiscent of Guilty Crown. Still, I like it so far, so I'll be back if you write up another chapter.

Oh, if possible, could you drop by my story, "Synchronizer" and review it too please?