I like your idea of adding bonus chapters. It allows you to add more like about vixen hitting a teacher and gives answers (which lead to more questions like what the teacher did to her friends to set vixen off). It's cool. Only advice: update. Today would be great. Tomorrow is okay too...

Wow I love this :D Vixen is a really interesting character, as is Chase! I really can't wait to read more ;)

Wow, I love this story so much! :D

You're writing sounds so professional, and I'm already addicted to this.

I'm loving Vixen, because I love when writers make a female protagonist that's really able to kick some ass.

Well done, and keep updating! I'll definitely be following this story.

:)

I was kinda wishin she'd punch him in the face...just for the hell of it. Keep updating :P

Icing sounds good right about now...and I see why she doesn't want to go home!

I'd like to see where this will go :) update soon

Like your story:)

Wow haha! I love this chapter! Update soon!

I hope the next chapter is posted soon. I want to see where this goes.

Great story! While I was reading my laptop almost died. I was at the point where He walks in. So I had to run up stairs then back only to find my friend logging in to her facebook. She just up and log out of my stuff without asking! And if looks could kill mine would have blown up galaxies. This is just to prove I'm a dedicated follower!

Oh, how can I possibly enumerate the reasons why I love your character, Nikki, upon first glance (read)?

I honestly hope you'll write a story all about her, even if Vixen's story just came about. And not only do I absolutely adore Nikki, but I find the rest of the characters very much intriguing. I can already see traces of complexity in them. Chase Kingsley is currently my second favorite. I'd usually die of boredom whenever some hot and mysterious teacher would pop up, but Mr. Kingsley is truthfully and posi-tute-ly (as Evie, from Libba Bray's Diviners, would say) just enigmatic. I like his answer, by the way, the one where he said, "The mind."

I am a sucker for guys who are interested in intelligence and I don't even know why.

On to the story: The summary made me think of vampires. I don't like vampires - with a special exception to Damon Salvatore - but I thought I'd give it a go since I saw the, *Full Summary Inside*, bit. And it turns out I did the right choice - especially when I read that Chase Kingsley was teaching Psychology. It's a subject I think would go perfectly well with stories such as this.

So far I am hooked to your story. Seriously. But I do ask of one thing: I hope you flesh out Vixen. She's not horrible and I have absolutely no right to say anything about her future actions because she's YOUR character, but I really do hope she won't turn out so clichéd, if you know what I mean, because I can't just love the male romantic interest and not the girl.

Okay, to sum everything up - I love this story already.