Haha, I love your book:)

Haha. I didn't bother reading the first chapter(sorry) and I like this chapter a lot! Good job:)

Interesting set-up. Appreciated the Airplane reference. I think maybe you could have expanded some parts to make it seem more like a book than a movie.

This was short, but I can see lots happening in the next book!

I can't wait till book 2 :D

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

I can't agree with the song choice but -sniff- I love this friggin chapter!

I've waiting since chapter friggin 5!

That's it! I paid good imaginary money for this! I want a second book!

Sh!t, I'm crying too! She really know how to work a crowd!

yes. I DO know what you're talking about ;) omg i can't believe it! Noella Marie Katherine Olivia Everly is a queen! (i don't know HOW you typed it every single time. I had to look up every name to find out the next one!)

Haha, thought ya had a bf! Not the touchy-touchy type I see!

But I like this chapter, it made me go, "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!" A little to loud because my mom gave me this funny look, and I told her, "You had me tested" And she nodded.

{You should know what show that came from! Wink Wink!}

Anyways good job Luv, and keep updating!

-ABW

Awwwww! (Wish I had an uncle like that) This story made me laugh and cried and I love it! Keep updating! -ABW

omg! so sad, louie was wonderful. And i see what you did there...with the bow tie thing! :P

Nice chapter! And i soo believe in the ways of the chocolate!

Pffft. Cruella. Nice. LOL :)

your story is doing great :) and i can't wait for the action :D i love action. I didn't know about this plagiarism thing until recently, too. And by recently i mean like now