This is awe-inspiring, especially the last two stanzas... I got goosebumps. I loved the line "And my heart is beating on the wrong side today", that line was just amazing. Brilliant, awesome, fantasticalally fabulous work!

This was amazing. I ate this up.

The poetry style is so unique. I've never read anything like it. It's very captivating and emotional, and it sends such a romantic vibe...

Happy writing, friend
-sapphire

I...have...no...words. This is really well written and amazing!