Hey sapphire! May I take your hat sir? If you still don't know who this is it's Hannah. :-) oh, I have a question: how are you able to vomit if your guts are strewn everywhere?

Wow. Just wow.

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I like your writing style and how you turn such dark content into what would be an innocent little girl's game. If not for the gore. And the violence.

We should send this to the Fictionpress staff and tell them to add 'Horror' as a category for Poetry. I think I might be scared for the entire day. Good job, you just scared the hell out of me! It's a great poem, and I loved it.

I enjoyed this and I'm probably going to laugh the next time I hear chloroform.

This was highly disturbing for I was picturing that being me. It was funny to think about though and I do like the rest of the story with it. The crazy love this lady has is something else. A serial killer after men. Killing them with her love...literally. The violence and bloody scenes make it all the more real. *laughs* *shivers*