I've always wanted to do a Resident Evil fanfic based around Egyptian mythology (cuz I'm weird like that) featuring Sakhmet as the main character, so this caught my eye. Granted, it's not much, but I'm sure once you get the ball rolling you can flesh out a compelling tale for our Egyptian deities. As far as the grammar and whatnot I found this: ' he asked her to stop she wouldn't, couldn't,' to be the most jarring, and little hiccups like this can infest a story without proper proofreading.

Awesome premise with a seriously badass goddess that just need a shot in the arm as far as fleshing out the story. Update soon!