I like this and you can definitely see how much the Beatles influenced this because it reminds me of their songs. I love the imagery because it's very clever and can certainly give you a new perspective on how to see things. I did see a little error which are probably down to typing - "picturless" is missing an 'e' and "turing" is missing a 'n'. But apart from that, I think it's a wonderful poem and I think it's clever and awesome!