You wrote this in third grade? (jaw drops) This is AMAZING. I literally got chills. :O.

Wow, this is amazing. Thank you.

You made this (or at least the original) in the third grade? Wonderful. My favorite part is 'Remember the lives of those cut brief, But remember from which the ashes came, A phoenix, A hope born anew' it really says something. Something that I cannot really put into words. Again, it was great.

nice tribute poem enjoyed