Sorry it's been so long since I last reviewed! :)
Love the direction the story is going in, but I feel like chapters should be a little shorter; I find it difficult to get through one in one sitting. :L
I spotted typos throughout as well, so I suggest just re-reading it a little more to iron them out. It just makes it difficult to read at times.
Looking forwards to reading the next part though. :D

Zahra's inner strength and growth in this chapter shone through beautifully. Nice characterization in this chapter on her behalf.

I feel like this is a teaser for the fight and the things Tajara's character promises, but at the same time it was an interesting build up. It was nice to see a moment of sweetness between them as well. Great chapter.

Nice chapter. I really want to see what happens in that fight between the two.

Comparing hunters to serial murderers is genius. It's probably my favorite part of this chapter, as well as the cute moments of our couple to be. Zahra and Tajara are both growing as characters and I like the development of each one. Great update even if it took a little longer.

This chapter shows that Tajara actually has a soft side. I about this fight. I'm anticipating the outcome.

It has it's cute moments with the flashback and Zahra's comment about the bat lilies. They seemed to come to an understanding in the end. How will this affect the fight? I wonder...

Sweet chapter that gives a nice background to Tajara and Zahra. I like the way thier relationship is going.

See Zahra? He's not SO bad, is he?

I'm anxious to see this fight between them. It sounds like it's going to be epic.

I like the flashback between tajara and zahra. it made the end result cute and zahra's face at the end such a cutie.

I feel sorry for Zahra, especially the way she's being treated. I think Tajara has reasons but still. He should open up.

there's more to tajara then there seems. leastwise that's what i get. i think there's a reason why he killed them. i think maybe they're hiding stuff too if they offered zahra up to be his bride to keep him away. nope, some shit's going down in gir forest. i just wonder what.

Zahra's character is very relatable for me. I dunno why I just really like her. Please update soon! I want to know what happens next!

The complexity of Tajara's mentality is very intriguing. I wonder if Zahra can being herself to try and defeat him in battle.