This is amazing so far and I am so excited to read more about this book whenever you post next. I mean I wish that it was a tad longer, but I am not complaining. This is awesome! :)

your writing is so beautiful. so simplistically short, but full of meaning. it sounds almost like a poem.

I really like this...and I have to tell you the blowjobs made me laugh until I cried. Sorry, I hope you don't mind that. I usually don't enjoy stories along this line, but you wrote this very well. Thanks for the great read. Check out my stuff if you like too.
-Scarlet

As always your writing style is simply to die for. It all flows so perfectly into itself like a giant swirl of colors. I like the concept of this and how it's more like a series of vignettes than chapters.

Ooh, I rather like this set-up! :-) Very interesting and cute.