|Reviews for S-brb-ya|
| Midnight St Lauder 1/27/13 . chapter 1
I may not be American but I know a thing or two, and I also know that this poem is fantastic. It's sharp and clear as the smack of a paddle on a ping pong ball. Also it reminds me a bit of 'we didn't start the fire'. The flow of it. Great work, instant fav :D
| Abraham Lincoln 1/5/13 . chapter 1
Thought the title indicated something even more experimental, bro.
Why Top Hat? What decade's this, mate?
Like White house, green yard, easy image.
Thought you chase the rhymes a bit too hard
- choosing words to make it rhyme which are bit bland, pal.
Really nice idea & pretty well executed, dude.
| FictionHeart 12/30/12 . chapter 1
It's really simple and yet really powerful. I really like it, but I think you could have used the word female for the line with cat if you used the word male for dog. Just a suggestion.
| hal99 12/30/12 . chapter 1