|Reviews for Sound Waves|
| darkershadeofpale 6/15/13 . chapter 1
Firstly, this is gorgeously insightful and I love your rhyming - it's always so on point and seamless and I am endlessly jealous of your ability to do so. The last stanza (verse?) is particularly lovely. It's straightforward and blunt - which is precisely what gives it such punch and impact.
That said, the first two lines are my favourite - just because it's such a real, tangible image. And it sets the tone of the piece and just generally creates a really solid base to work on, which is lovely.
Second, I am really happy (this is the best word I can think of 48 hours before a law exam and at 2:19am) that you're still around and paying attention to me whenever I happen to rediscover FP. As soon as my exams are over (if I live), I'm looking forward to seeing all the things you've written while I've been away.
You're fantastic, etc.
| killMeN0w 3/12/13 . chapter 1
I've always wanted to review this. But (I admit, I'm lazy) I never did.
I actually had texted the last bit
"But of all things torn asunder
The loudest sound
I have found
Is the silence we make
When a trusting heart we break"
...to a friend of mine. To tell her how awesome I thought this was. And this part was saved in my cell for quite a while, before it broke. The cell, I mean.
I thought this was thought provoking. Simply (and extremely well) put. Silence IS the loudest sound we make. I can't explain the awesome-ness of this poem. Kudo's! A job well done!
| J112011 1/11/13 . chapter 1
nicely said :) I hope it's just hypothetical and you didn't really break any hearts recently ;)
| Kallie Bryant 1/8/13 . chapter 1
Beautiful, as always. You always know just how to speak to the heart.
| Princess-anna57 1/7/13 . chapter 1
3 I LOVE this! A simple piece but very powerful as well.
| Ygg 1/3/13 . chapter 1
Powerfully true! Love the rhyme. Well done!
| nickyO 1/1/13 . chapter 1
Well done, touching and sad.
| SirScott 12/31/12 . chapter 1
There's a lot of truth to this poem.
| William G. Thorne 12/31/12 . chapter 1
Sadly, I know this all too well.