Aww that's it?! This is epic! I really do want to read more

Yay! Go Kerestel! He's definently my favorite character! If it weren't for him, then Annie wouldn't know that Naspeth has the dreams too!

Yay! Annie is finally here and Naspeth recognizes her! I wonder when Annie will recognize him!

OMG! That would be wonderful! I can't wait for those two to put their heads together!

Becoming his prisoner and stuff... And I'm pretty sure she wasn't allowed to go somewhere...? Idk, I have a bad memory.

lol, oh Kerestel, i like this kid. i'm also eager to hear about way she has to die and how things will develope between Annie and Naspeth, and i'm also pretty damn sure that Annie is the Shadow Queen Naspeth's been waiting for, and i think he knows it too but is too scared to admit it.

Well, think of that as your "head start." At least you have it started. That's more then most people have, lol.

I love the little editings you did here. It's not much different from the first one, but its a lot better.

I like reading stories in Third person, but not good at writing them. One of the ideas I have I want to write in Third person, I just wouldn't know where to start. I love writing in First rather then Third.

Yes and no... I mean Naspeth, but the other guy... what'shisface... I like him too. anyway, review time!
Amazing chapter! Awww, they're already getting along! It's like I said with Daren in your other story... if she doesn't take him, I most certainly will. *licks lips* ;)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

People disliked him? i loved him from the beginning he is awesome! Great chapter by the way can't wait for they next one!

Nice job on this chapter

YEAH! I love Naspeth's attitude it's AWESOME can't wait for the next chapter!

Amazing chapter! Ahhh... And there's the infuriating guy that always makes an appearance somewhere. :D I've been expecting him. It will be interesting to see how this turns out, as I always say. :)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

Haha. This is where it gets exciting :) it sort of reminds me of beauty and the beast.

I love this story

I had to make a new account due to some spam that I was getting on my email. So my old account was Writing In Ink Forever.

I'm so glad you're rewriting this, and that you've finally came up with the trilogy for this book! I'm so excited to read it!

Naspeth is an amazing character. I love how you portrayed him. Annie amuses me, lol.

Kerestel's in this one. I really liked him that last time I read this