|Reviews for We are gone|
| Daemone Angelus 12/31/12 . chapter 1
FML. Not a single error. :P I would leave out the commas though. They don't seem to enhance, or change anything in the story, but you seem to be ocd about using punctuation. :P
It is an unusual structure for me, but I like it all the same. It's very WELL structured. A story about life, IMO. But mostly the tragic nature of it. There is more to life, but something tells me that you have been to the depth of that dark void. The one that changed the depth of which you see things.
If ignorance is bliss, we shall die miserable, eh? .