I liked the emotion behind the poem. You could feel Rene's grief and bitterness.
I didn't like the lines that didn't rhyme. Of course poetry doesn't always have to rhyme, but the abrupt departures from pattern were a little jarring.
Over all nice job. (Not another like, just an acknowledgement).

Now I'm not very good at reviews, but I really like this piece. I found it quite difficult to understand at first (probably because I'm really tired) but after a little thought, it is really interesting and very well done. :)