Very cool. Totally strange. I am really enjoying it. Keep it up!

Doesn't seem to matter where you start reading this story; you could probably read it backwards. Still don't know what it is but I like it. Good going!

This is pretty twisted, and I am not sure if i understand it. But, I really like it!

Are you familiar with Carlton Mellick III? Your writing is very much in the form of his Gonzo Fiction style... not bad! keep it up!