Great ending to an awesome story! I cannot wait to read the sequel :D

Only read the first chapter, but it hooks well. I will read more.

Lawl, "The Lord had been gone for a while. No one knew when he would be back." XD Well preparing to destroy the world does require a bit of solitary time, apparently even for God.

Going back to the chapter, the suspense is thickening and I'm left wondering what will happen to Talia: will she go to hell, or will the Clarion Angels steal her? Update!

Love it! Can't wait to read more...

The story gets more interesting with every chapter. Keep up the good work!

Aww, you made a cliffhanger ending! XD Hurry and write the next chapter! I want to find out what happens next :3

Sweet and touching chapter. I really want to know why Talia is so special!

So cool... can't wait to read more... great read!

Hmm, I'm not sure how I'm supposed to view the angel, but whatever. I also wonder whether Talia made the right choice or not. Guess I'll find out eventually.

Talk about pressure. The fate of the world is Talia's hands. Wow, that would suck. Great chapter, I can sense the climax is coming. Update!

Hmm, intriguing. I wonder what made her so special in the first place?

Great development! Can't wait to see your version of Hell.

Wow, the ending was certainly creepy: "I want you to follow me into hell." Well, doesn't that sound like a nice date? *insert sarcasm there.

Anyways, I enjoyed this chapter. Update!

Hey there, this is Luna's Child. I'm on a different computer, hence why I'm not logged in. Anyways, this was a fantastic chapter, and also shows why I don't go to these types of parties .

Anyhow, I can't wait to read more!

Once again, this was an excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.