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Great job! in every paragraph there is something new and creative, you really have some iamgination and love the world your characters are into

hope to see more

Very interesting. I would love to see more!

This chapter was pretty interesting. Nice job re-introducing the characters, Cass, Levi, and Reese. I can't wait for how the story will pan out in the near future. Keep updating!

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